Loved to see the first characters back to record the changes that have happened -- how Jay is now a part of the community, trusted to run chores, accepted by the old timers.
And loved the reality of neighbors taking care of each other out in the country since they really do.
Good story to build on the whole arc, Jess. Really liked it.
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Date: 2005-01-10 09:30 am (UTC)And loved the reality of neighbors taking care of each other out in the country since they really do.
Good story to build on the whole arc, Jess. Really liked it.
Renee