WARNING FOR ICK! Elijah comes back from visiting Gina and Angel...

[palace-jake.livejournal.com]

This is a dark log. Bad things are said, bad things happen. Read it, don't read it, make an adult decision.

This log takes place after Elijah visits Gina and Angel and as a result of the
emails between Elijah and Jake.

Elijah read Jake’s email and ran his hand through his hair nervously. Fuck’. He looked out of the car windows as they traveled back to town, quietly he watched as the late afternoon turned to evening.


When he finally got back to Palace he went to his room and looked in the mirror. The mark that Angel had left on his face was still a vivid red. The skin wasn’t broken, but there was no denying that it was a scratch. He hitched a sigh and left the room. *Might as well get this over with*

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[palace-johnny.livejournal.com]

OK, so I'm reading along, thinking this is a good scene, not as bad as I thought it'd be after talking to Jay in chat -- was expecting Jake to beat the crap out of Lij or choke him again or something -- when I suddenly hit the end and saw Lija curled up with his thumb in his mouth like a five-year-old and my eyeballs exploded. Seriously, I had to feel around for a kleenix and clean off my monitor and everything. [glare]

That final image is brilliant, and sets off all the previous action beautifully. Great stuff, you two! Mwah!

Angie

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[linden-jay.livejournal.com]

It's the transition that's killing me. How the direction that this is leading is so obvious, and yet Elijah doesn't see it, and won't see it- even if someone pointed it out to him. Jess plays it so damned well that it hurts to write. Especially since this is only partway through this arc, and I know some of what's coming.

And that wasn't SUPPOSED to happen in last nights log- was supposed to be abandonment issues ONLY!

Sick disgusting pup. Hate him.

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[palaceelijah.livejournal.com]

He woke slowly, rubbing his eyes and looked around confused. He burrowed into the pile of blanket, rubbing his face against the pillow, smelling Jake on it and smiling. He curled into a ball before stretching his legs and arms out with a jaw popping yawn.

Jake. His Squeezy. He had let him stay, even after Elijah had screwed up and made him angry, Squeezy was nice enough to let him stay.

Elijah looked up at the other comments and bared his teeth, glaring. They didn't know, they didn't understand. His Squeezy loved him, needed him.

Curling up again on his nest on the floor he drifted off to sleep until Jakey woke. As he slept there was a sweet smile on his face and a faint purring noise from deep inside him.