Jess -- you know, that's kind of funny because Liam doesn't really do a lot in this chunk; he has a couple lines of dialogue in Johnny's memory and that's pretty much it. I'm curious what made you focus on Liam in this one?

I'm glad you enjoyed it, as always. :D It's funny that with so much plotting and planning and fitting and figuring going into this plotline, what really stands out is the emotions. It's like I work out the basic framework of actions and occurrences with Jay and Raven, and the characters react to it all. Their feelings are their own, and sometimes they won't even do what I tell them, but instead go dashing off in some weird direction with me following along as best I can. It's frustrating at times, but the result is pleasing so I don't fight them too much. [rueful smile]

Thanks!

Angie